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My entry for :iconi-am-a-silver-lining:'s contest


I really wanted to do a flipnote animation, but I ran out of time ;;A;;
So I did since it's been so long since I've done something large like this
and despite being please with the results, I think I need more practice xD
These were the last two pixels I made before this
:icontomfirmer::iconstraycatz90:
I still wanna pet her and I'm gonna keep requesting critiques since I can learn what to fix for the future

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Muma
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Straycatz90/Tomfirmer
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Critique by Vindicta-Prime Dec 27, 2016, 1:02:14 PM
Let's start with me saying I adore pixel art and I love this OC, yes I know of her purpose but she's still cute.

Now we do this the way we do in my art school:

colors: they look lovely. The chosen palette is just the right hues between pastel and neon for this artwork. I'd recommend to make the brighter lines of the shading softer to make it look more like metal. The optics specifically are interesting since they give the effect of glowing, keep doing that. You could improve on your shading however since it looks like you have two light sources here: one from above and another slightly angled from the left.

line-art: it's pretty smooth for pixel art. The difference to the colors is just right to make it visible but not stick out too much. Very good.

pose: at first the sign on her chest/belly confused me but now I see what it is. She has a solid pose with no noodle like limbs. Maybe you could make them more fluid next time by adding perspective? Otherwise this looks fine except the right arm. It's angle makes it look a little U shaped.

intend: The intention is probably to either annoy someone or (more likely) to have fun and there is nothing wrong with having fun. I also like the expression, it gives her more life. Just one word of advice: rotating ears doesn't make them bigger.

Overall a adorable picture! I hope this helps you improve. n_n
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Prismatic-Machine Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Omg looks so cute! >v< 
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank You :,D!
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AnyathePsycat Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Awww she looks so cute 0w0 smol angry llama XD
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
XD thank you!
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Vindicta-Prime Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Student Filmographer
You excel on chibis. She looks adorable.
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RadioactiveRays Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ;;v;; :tighthug:
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Vindicta-Prime Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2016  Student Filmographer
You're welcome. It's a nice pic after all! :la:
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